Speaking without words v1.1

Photography \ Still life | 12/24/05 @733 | ZiN | critiques (9) | views (571)

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Here is the second piece in the three piece series that I recently shot. Again the reflections off the guitar base are pretty high but with the angle it masks the objects out of it so maybe this was an improvement upon the last one.

Kodak Z740 5.0 mp (10x Zoom)
Close up setting w/o flash
Single light source

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oca

12/24/05 @786

wo, i really like this, the b&n works great here,.. nice job!

UE-Skateman

12/24/05 @812

nice job, you reshot the 1.0 without the shitty reflection, looks alot better, now get rid of the pick, distracting

ZiN

12/24/05 @824

UE-Skateman- haha! But, but I thought the pick was a defining element... Oh well, at least there was improvement inbetween shots. Also I didn't reshoot anything, I took a couple shots with the same lighting while changing angles. Just taking the advice that is normally given to space out your work so it gets decent exposure. So if I get time tomorrow the 3rd and final photo will be put up.

Other than that, thanks for the votes and comments. Every bit helps forward my work.

ratcatcher

12/24/05 @840

Looks like Ibanez.. Am I right? +10/10 Kewl!

Merry Xmas!

ZiN

12/24/05 @856

ratcatcher- Indeed you are right, it is an Ibanez. GSA60 model.

UE-Skateman

12/25/05 @215

yeah man, i think that if you're going for a focal point in a piece, try to let it come naturally, looks way to forced, takes away from the sleek plastic type texture of the guitar and it's beautiful curves, that's why the pick isn't in the cards here, nice thought though

eowyn

12/26/05 @656

this is MORE like it!

ps: Thank you again.

Madanapale

12/27/05 @015

Sure looks much better!!!...Great work!
Carlos

Passenger

12/27/05 @572

nice work, much better, I won't say anything about the guitar pick anymore since you already know it's distracting

good composition and I like the reflection on the guitar!

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